Wednesday, January 23, 2013

School uniforms are bad


All around the world, students wear certain clothing. Which is school uniforms. Every parent ad teacher force the students to wear these 'school uniforms.' Well- the real problem is is this good for students? Well. school uniforms are not beneficial for students.
  First of all, school uniforms stop students from socializing with other student.s I fudamentally agree that students may wear some inappropriate clothes without school uniforms, But this is also a part if students' expressions. Thus, clothes help us to express ourselves. But school uniforms are just makes students hide themselves. Moreover, because students can do this they ca also socialize with other students. Clothes- they are also big part of self expressions.
  Second, it's against student's rights and it causes stress. Every student also has rights  to express themselves. As I said before, but school uniforms are just ignoring them. And because of this, students can also feel stress and their grades will also decrease. There is an actual study for this: at one school, the grades had fallen quickley and students also surveyed that school uniforms gives them stress.
 Those were my two reasons why school uniforms are bad. But however there are also these opposition arguments: School uniforms makes student focus in achedemic studies. Moreover, if the students wear school uniforms, they can less focus on fashion. However, this isn't true. If they wear school uniforms, they can get stress. They can also get stress.
 Second, some people say school uniforms ca n prevent school bullying. In addition, they believe that school uniforms can prevent them being judged for what they wear. However, this is also wrong. Because in school may people have the same economic situations because they all live near each other.
  In conclusion, school uniforms are bad for students. First, school uniforms stop students from socializing with other students. Second, it's against student's rights and it causes stress. However, some believe school uniforms are student's motivation to do better, and prevents school bullying.

1 comment:

  1. Dayon,

    This is a good essay. You make some good arguments to support your thesis but you need to provide facts and links to support the facts.

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